Seguem algumas poucas sugestões de revisão.

Abraços,
Thiago Pezzo (Tico)

November 29, 2022 12:03 AM, "Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana" <phls@debian.org> wrote:

Olá,

Segue em anexo o arquivo para revisão.

Abraços,

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Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana (phls)
Belo Horizonte - Brasil
Debian Developer
Site: http://phls.com.br
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