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  • Re: Coil / Will Dockery

    From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to Dink on Tue Aug 16 04:22:14 2022
    XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments

    Dink wrote in message
    news:410dd9aa-7afa-4d0b-971e-1c21a3d69d18@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Coil

    This coil of pain
    memory burns
    with flashing image
    and haunting misses.

    Distinct dream vision
    mixed up with consciousness
    train seems right on top of me
    conductor has an agenda.

    Only the god see beyond this veil
    I seen them eyes
    red blazing shaking.

    No time to think,
    no desire to.

    There seems to be a wide awake
    slow ride
    consciousness carries
    stretches through these years
    these days... this minute.

    As if the night could purify
    rather than corrupt
    my reptilian hands
    my repetition in signs.


    I see you are still taking drugs, Will.

    No, troll much?

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  • From MummyChunk@21:1/5 to All on Thu Mar 20 14:15:10 2025
    W.Dockery wrote:
    On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:


    Miguel Sucio wrote:
    MummyChunk wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Coil

    This coil of pain
    memory burns
    with flashing image
    and haunting misses.

    Distinct dream vision
    mixed up with consciousness
    train seems right on top of me
    conductor has an agenda.

    Only the gods see beyond this veil
    I saw those eyes
    red blazing and shaking.

    No time to think,
    no desire to.

    There seems to be a wide awake
    slow ride
    conciousness carries
    stretches through these years
    these days... this minute.

    As if the night could purify
    rather than corrupt
    my reptilian hands
    my repetition is signs.

    -Will Dockery (2003)



    Here is a Will Dockery gem


    What makes it a gem? Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
    a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc

    I just enjoyed reading it!



    Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.

    😏


    This is a response to the post seen at:
    http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739





    Good afternoon to you too.


    This is a response to the post seen at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=683952998#683952998

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  • From Will-Dockery@21:1/5 to All on Sat Mar 22 17:35:02 2025
    MummyChunk wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:
    On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:


    Miguel Sucio wrote:
    MummyChunk wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Coil

    This coil of pain
    memory burns
    with flashing image
    and haunting misses.

    Distinct dream vision
    mixed up with consciousness
    train seems right on top of me
    conductor has an agenda.

    Only the gods see beyond this veil
    I saw those eyes
    red blazing and shaking.

    No time to think,
    no desire to.

    There seems to be a wide awake
    slow ride
    consciousness carries
    stretches through these years
    these days... this minute.

    As if the night could purify
    rather than corrupt
    my reptilian hands
    my repetition in signs.

    -Will Dockery (2003)



    Here is a Will Dockery gem


    What makes it a gem? Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
    a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc

    I just enjoyed reading it!



    Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.

    😏


    This is a response to the post seen at:
    http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739




    Good afternoon to you too.




    Hello again MC.

    😏


    View the attachments for this post at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=686076574#686076574




    This is a response to the post seen at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=683952998#683952998

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  • From Will-Dockery@21:1/5 to All on Fri Mar 28 20:06:51 2025
    MummyChunk wrote:

    W.Dockery wrote:
    On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:


    Miguel Sucio wrote:
    MummyChunk wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Coil

    This coil of pain
    memory burns
    with flashing image
    and haunting misses.

    Distinct dream vision
    mixed up with consciousness
    train seems right on top of me
    conductor has an agenda.

    Only the gods see beyond this veil
    I saw those eyes
    red blazing and shaking.

    No time to think,
    no desire to.

    There seems to be a wide awake
    slow ride
    conciousness carries
    stretches through these years
    these days... this minute.

    As if the night could purify
    rather than corrupt
    my reptilian hands
    my repetition is signs.

    -Will Dockery (2003)



    Here is a Will Dockery gem


    What makes it a gem? Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
    a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc

    I just enjoyed reading it!



    Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.

    😏


    This is a response to the post seen at:
    http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739




    Good afternoon to you too.




    Hello again.

    😏


    This is a response to the post seen at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=683952998#683952998

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  • From MummyChunk@21:1/5 to All on Fri Mar 28 21:51:07 2025
    Will-Dockery wrote:

    MummyChunk wrote:

    W.Dockery wrote:
    On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:


    Miguel Sucio wrote:
    MummyChunk wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Coil

    This coil of pain
    memory burns
    with flashing image
    and haunting misses.

    Distinct dream vision
    mixed up with consciousness
    train seems right on top of me
    conductor has an agenda.

    Only the gods see beyond this veil
    I saw those eyes
    red blazing and shaking.

    No time to think,
    no desire to.

    There seems to be a wide awake
    slow ride
    conciousness carries
    stretches through these years
    these days... this minute.

    As if the night could purify
    rather than corrupt
    my reptilian hands
    my repetition is signs.

    -Will Dockery (2003)



    Here is a Will Dockery gem


    What makes it a gem? Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like >>>> a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc

    I just enjoyed reading it!



    Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.

    😏


    This is a response to the post seen at:
    http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739




    Good afternoon to you too.



    Hello again.

    😏




    Hi there 🥂


    This is a response to the post seen at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=683952998#683952998

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  • From Will-Dockery@21:1/5 to All on Sat Apr 5 15:19:38 2025
    MummyChunk wrote:

    Will-Dockery wrote:

    MummyChunk wrote:

    W.Dockery wrote:
    On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:


    Miguel Sucio wrote:
    MummyChunk wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Coil

    This coil of pain
    memory burns
    with flashing image
    and haunting misses.

    Distinct dream vision
    mixed up with consciousness
    train seems right on top of me
    conductor has an agenda.

    Only the gods see beyond this veil
    I saw those eyes
    red blazing and shaking.

    No time to think,
    no desire to.

    There seems to be a wide awake
    slow ride
    conciousness carries
    stretches through these years
    these days... this minute.

    As if the night could purify
    rather than corrupt
    my reptilian hands
    my repetition is signs.

    -Will Dockery (2003)



    Here is a Will Dockery gem


    What makes it a gem? Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like >>>>> a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc

    I just enjoyed reading it!



    Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.

    😏


    This is a response to the post seen at:
    http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739




    Good afternoon to you too.



    Hello again.

    😏



    Hi there 🥂




    Good afternoon, MC

    😏


    This is a response to the post seen at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=683952998#683952998

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  • From MummyChunk@21:1/5 to All on Sat Apr 5 15:48:56 2025
    Will-Dockery wrote:

    MummyChunk wrote:

    Will-Dockery wrote:

    MummyChunk wrote:

    W.Dockery wrote:
    On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:


    Miguel Sucio wrote:
    MummyChunk wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Coil

    This coil of pain
    memory burns
    with flashing image
    and haunting misses.

    Distinct dream vision
    mixed up with consciousness
    train seems right on top of me
    conductor has an agenda.

    Only the gods see beyond this veil
    I saw those eyes
    red blazing and shaking.

    No time to think,
    no desire to.

    There seems to be a wide awake
    slow ride
    conciousness carries
    stretches through these years
    these days... this minute.

    As if the night could purify
    rather than corrupt
    my reptilian hands
    my repetition is signs.

    -Will Dockery (2003)



    Here is a Will Dockery gem


    What makes it a gem? Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like >>>>>> a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc

    I just enjoyed reading it!



    Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.

    😏


    This is a response to the post seen at:
    http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739




    Good afternoon to you too.



    Hello again.

    😏



    Hi there 🥂



    Good afternoon, MC

    😏



    Howdy 🤠


    This is a response to the post seen at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=683952998#683952998

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