about deleting. correcting poems re: millenial correctionism
From
Greg Westin@21:1/5 to
All on Mon Oct 23 15:56:38 2023
I am not sure, but I think the millenials, like
taylor swift and other artists when they write will
write something in their notebook for day, or somewhere
and they will generally rewrite, probably with a loving
heart everything.
We look at our medium here, as it appeared in 2002, as advanced,
but somehow, the rewrite of things, does generate quality music, and everything generally, and it looks like it needs to be taught.
Along with the snipping of poetry, and this and that, and adding of choruses and maybe putting more content in. There isn't really much here on this groups, it doesn't really rival what hollywood has, when i think about it, google and silicon valley, in terms of a million dollar production studio, an agent, or an artist
contract, therapy, even video making assistant.
Google is sort of 10 laps behind, but java is still in the race with things from china, and everything, but what do we have when we're in los angeles after all this, and we don't even have a agent to meet once a week and a place to sing, or read our
poems or somewhere to publish.
It's great to post here, but at times, it's lonely, and depressing, and the outreach to God, somewhere in Boulder, Google, and silicon valley, is losing its quality and probably should go back to an open mic night here in Portland, and the 1997
experiment, or something like sub pop with a hybrid culture.
But noone in portland notices really, me at 48, but actually I think someone has.
It takes a while to critique what the harvard / columbia beatniks did in boulder from 1980 - 1997 as progressive, sometimes really wrong group.
Sometimes Los Angeles pure thought and real life stuff really works here. But correct me if I'm wrong, what even in Portland do we need.
It's hard for me.
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