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  • Re: The battle front against the perversity of affirming care

    From Art Sackman@21:1/5 to ScottW on Thu Jun 22 20:53:27 2023
    On Thursday, June 22, 2023 at 11:40:12 PM UTC-4, ScottW wrote:
    https://redstate.com/jeffc/2023/06/22/watch-gabrielle-clark-on-pulling-kids-out-of-the-trans-cult-n765493

    The detransitioned are being dehumanized because they want their story oppressed.

    It's sick.

    ScottW
    You have pronoun issues,

    In deciphering your context, they would not refer to the detransitioned, it would apply
    to unreferenced wokesters,

    but grammatically speaking, your structure links they with the detransitioned. which makes little sense.
    I find you make this error quite frequently.
    Its' what engineers do,
    just like my mixing up exponentials is something social studies guys do.

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  • From ScottW@21:1/5 to All on Thu Jun 22 20:40:10 2023
    https://redstate.com/jeffc/2023/06/22/watch-gabrielle-clark-on-pulling-kids-out-of-the-trans-cult-n765493

    The detransitioned are being dehumanized because they want their story oppressed.

    It's sick.

    ScottW

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  • From ScottW@21:1/5 to Art Sackman on Thu Jun 22 21:37:31 2023
    On Thursday, June 22, 2023 at 8:53:28 PM UTC-7, Art Sackman wrote:
    On Thursday, June 22, 2023 at 11:40:12 PM UTC-4, ScottW wrote:
    https://redstate.com/jeffc/2023/06/22/watch-gabrielle-clark-on-pulling-kids-out-of-the-trans-cult-n765493

    The detransitioned are being dehumanized because they want their story oppressed.

    It's sick.

    ScottW
    You have pronoun issues,

    In deciphering your context, they would not refer to the detransitioned, it would apply
    to unreferenced wokesters,

    but grammatically speaking, your structure links they with the detransitioned.
    which makes little sense.

    You have two choices. Associate they with the detransitioned or the dehumanizers.
    Don't tell me I was wrong with assuming you could figure out which.

    As far as your application to be my english teacher.....I've filed it appropriately.

    ScottW

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  • From Art Sackman@21:1/5 to ScottW on Fri Jun 23 12:51:13 2023
    On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 12:37:32 AM UTC-4, ScottW wrote:
    On Thursday, June 22, 2023 at 8:53:28 PM UTC-7, Art Sackman wrote:
    On Thursday, June 22, 2023 at 11:40:12 PM UTC-4, ScottW wrote:
    https://redstate.com/jeffc/2023/06/22/watch-gabrielle-clark-on-pulling-kids-out-of-the-trans-cult-n765493

    The detransitioned are being dehumanized because they want their story oppressed.

    It's sick.

    ScottW
    You have pronoun issues,

    In deciphering your context, they would not refer to the detransitioned, it would apply
    to unreferenced wokesters,

    but grammatically speaking, your structure links they with the detransitioned.
    which makes little sense.
    You have two choices. Associate they with the detransitioned or the dehumanizers.
    Don't tell me I was wrong with assuming you could figure out which.



    It's piss poor use of English.
    But it's what I expect from engineers.


    As far as your application to be my english teacher.....I've filed it appropriately.


    And now you made a capitalization error, though not nearly as bad as disjointed syntax.

    But don't worry. I don't do Trevor's research for free, and I'm not going to be your tutor for free.
    But I point out your errors in a constructive manner, hoping that eventually you will pay attention and think
    about how your fractured sentences appear to your readers.

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  • From ScottW@21:1/5 to Art Sackman on Fri Jun 23 13:08:53 2023
    On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 12:51:14 PM UTC-7, Art Sackman wrote:
    On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 12:37:32 AM UTC-4, ScottW wrote:
    On Thursday, June 22, 2023 at 8:53:28 PM UTC-7, Art Sackman wrote:
    On Thursday, June 22, 2023 at 11:40:12 PM UTC-4, ScottW wrote:
    https://redstate.com/jeffc/2023/06/22/watch-gabrielle-clark-on-pulling-kids-out-of-the-trans-cult-n765493

    The detransitioned are being dehumanized because they want their story oppressed.

    It's sick.

    ScottW
    You have pronoun issues,

    In deciphering your context, they would not refer to the detransitioned, it would apply
    to unreferenced wokesters,

    but grammatically speaking, your structure links they with the detransitioned.
    which makes little sense.
    You have two choices. Associate they with the detransitioned or the dehumanizers.
    Don't tell me I was wrong with assuming you could figure out which.

    It's piss poor use of English.
    But it's what I expect from engineers.
    As far as your application to be my english teacher.....I've filed it appropriately.
    And now you made a capitalization error, though not nearly as bad as disjointed syntax.

    But don't worry. I don't do Trevor's research for free, and I'm not going to be your tutor for free.
    But I point out your errors in a constructive manner, hoping that eventually you will pay attention and think
    about how your fractured sentences appear to your readers.

    I hope they are tortured by it.

    ScottW

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  • From Art Sackman@21:1/5 to ScottW on Fri Jun 23 14:53:58 2023
    On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 4:08:54 PM UTC-4, ScottW wrote:


    I hope they are tortured by it.

    ScottW

    worse than eating cooked spinach, but better than waterboarding.

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