• Filks of Shall We Dance

    From Arthur T.@21:1/5 to All on Thu Apr 21 13:17:25 2022
    I started these months apart, but finished them together (with RMF
    help about the scansion). The original can be seen/heard at <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QgVPnWmUqd4>.

    Title: Life's A Mess
    ttto: Shall We Dance by Richard Rogers & Oscar Hammerstein

    We're living in bad times
    But then we always were
    What should we go on doing,
    And just what should we defer

    We cannot just stay still
    Life goes on as we bide
    And so we see we're in for
    "Interesting" bumpy ride

    Life's a mess (is it me?)
    Everything's going wrong now, though I try (all's awry)
    I'm a mess (is it life?)
    I must curse; it's too much for just a sigh (ai ai ai!)
    And this mess
    It should make every person wonder why (as do I)
    Do we still bother living
    In this world so unforgiving
    Where the bastards have all success
    Can we change rules for winning
    Maybe have a new beginning
    To this mess
    I'm a mess
    It's a mess


    Title: Make A Wish
    ttto: Shall We Dance by Richard Rogers & Oscar Hammerstein

    We try to bend the rules
    The universe says "No"
    But still we look for loopholes
    That can make our mojo grow

    Of all the many ways
    The sky's the biggest call
    It gives us hope we might be
    Significant - not so small

    There's a star! Make a wish,
    On the first evening light to hit your eye (from on high)
    Meteor! Make a wish
    Make it fast 'fore the streak has left the sky (say good-bye)
    There's a hitch
    All the rules of the cosmos still apply (so I sigh)
    So your wish has no meaning
    There's no magic intervening
    It's your own work will make you rich
    But placebos are mighty
    Let us not dismiss them lightly
    Make your wish
    Make your wish
    Make your wish


    My lyrics copyright 2022 by Arthur Tansky. License granted for
    non-commercial, non-political archiving and performance as long as:
    1. copyright notice is maintained, and
    2. no money changes hands.

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  • From Joe Kesselman@21:1/5 to All on Wed Jun 15 23:35:54 2022
    Nicely done.

    I don't tend to say all four syllables of "interesting" unless I'm
    deliberately drawing it out, so I'd be tempted to sing

    "Interesting" bumpy ride
    as
    An "int'resting" bumpy ride



    "Ah yes. Life's like that," says the moon, picking her teeth with a tree branch. (Misquoted from _The Fourth Tower Of Inverness_, ZBS media)

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  • From Arthur T.@21:1/5 to Joe Kesselman on Thu Jun 16 12:25:43 2022
    In Message-ID:<t8e8es$omg$1@dont-email.me>,
    Joe Kesselman <keshlam.cat.nospam@verizon.net> wrote:

    I don't tend to say all four syllables of "interesting" unless I'm >deliberately drawing it out,

    Same here, except that I almost always hear it (in my mind) as four
    syllables when I'm writing lyrics. Ditto three syllables (rather than
    two) for "interest".

    so I'd be tempted to sing

    "Interesting" bumpy ride
    as
    An "int'resting" bumpy ride

    Thank you. That's an improvement, as it's also better grammar.

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