• One Sign of [Bad Academese] =?UTF-8?B?PSAgW1dlIGNvbXBhcmUgdGhlIHN0cmVu?

    From HenHanna@21:1/5 to All on Thu Dec 26 23:15:12 2024
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    We compare the kinds of entries made and the patterns of
    contributions and analyze the strengths and weaknesses of both
    processes of ...
    ...........
    Finally, we assess the strengths and weaknesses of this .........

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    (Lesson to be learned) One telling Sign of
    [Bad academic Writing] must be

    [ the strengths and weaknesses of ] esp. in the Abstract

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    bad: [ We compare (analyze, assess) the strengths and weaknesses of X
    and Y ]

    rather say:
    X is 34% more .........

    Y suffers from ...........

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